All Comments on 'April Fool Pt. 01'

Cliché after cliché after cliche.

That there was only one segment of this story, but then I saw the date. More, please! Esp. hot Mom & sister! omg...

"9 inches in length and 8 inches in diameter"

CIRCUMFERENCE! 8 inches in circumference! Otherwise, were talking about a school lunch sized can if Manwich. No pun intended.

Nothing hotter than a father knowing/ suspecting about his wife and son. My father knew but would never outright ask, just made comments.

@Rocky_North you are correct, I missed that and even meant to type that. Its funny because I was literally telling myself not to make that mistake and did it anyway. I think I thought about it too much, doh. When I send in my edits for this part I'll correct that. Thanks.

that is just a little smaller than a 🏈...

Wow. Sexy, hot, and well written. Need more

Other than 8" diameter I really liked this story. I thought it was really well written and I am looking forward to reading more.

Liking the build up, hope there's some good ol' juicy revenge coming the dads way. Will say, this story is seeming to set up to have the women be fucked by other dudes which I'm not really into, but regardless I'll keep following the story. Lots of promise at the least!

it was a good story until he took back the porn star. STDs on parade. i know they say that they at\re required to have checkups and wear condoms, but they still "dip" it in to fake a creampie and all it takes is one germ to sicken hundreds of people. otherwise good writing and please don't let him share his women with other men.

Really enjoyable. Look forward to ch2

Thanks for the positive feedback. I'm writing part two but it went in a different direction than originally planned. I'm hoping to finish the first draft soon.

Would love to see part two.

Hope that there won't be some male additions of any kind

Please write a part 2 or better yet a full series! I loved it too much for it to end here!

I think author just forgot completely about this site after writing this amazing story. To add the frustrations, he has written part 1 in title. I have set a reminder for every month to check my favourite series, and this work is there too.I am disappointed a little by such a huge break. If author reading this, please write the next part in series.

MAXIMUSTHEMAD - Please give us the readers the courtesy of letting us know if you are going to continue this story or not. We deserve to know so we don't waste our time checking your site.

I love the Story and hope that you still are wanting to ad a second Part to this amazing story

Damn... I truly hope you at least add a second part.

Will there be a second part?

Would live it, if you would wright a second part

Not bad, but as with most Democrats following through isn't in their nature and when they actually do it's just never as good.😂😂

Just poking you a little.😉

Pls Part 2 :)

Very good story. I enjoyed the display of maturity, self-confidence, and confidence of position within the family group of all members involved. The adoration, respect, and love between mother and son is how I would expect an incestuous life to be built upon. For the brother and sister to recognize and accept, without guilt, their feelings for each other was remarkable. As a avid reader of incest stories, I would love to see this develop into a series. In part 1, I find at least 6 subplots. With in-depth character development, this could easily become a novel. 5-stars.

Great 1st chapter. Very few mistakes that don’t distract from the story and make it “unreadable” All in all, 5 stars

Awesome story gave it a 5 and waiting for chapter 2 and maybe more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You wrote this in2020 where's the follow up I really liked this story and would like to read more of it so please continue with part 2!

Waiting on Pt 2 and Brian to finally fuck his sister.

I'm almost done with part two. I still have to have it edited a few more times. Didn't quite make it to April, but you can look forward to it coming soon.

Awesome im really waiting to read the next part to this story

Aww come on!!! Where's the rest!!!! This is damned good too -pout face-

Damn it! You hooked me with the pt 01 in the title. This was a great start, I just wish there were more chapters after this!

He's good with her fucking BBC and gang bangs??? CUCK???

Definitely need more!

Great story waiting for more hope you can finish the story

Is going to be a part 2 or more of this please say yes.....

This was really a good story. While a little uneven in spots, it’s a fantastic premise and well executed. SO much potential!

Dam was looking to read more but after 4 years don't look like it will happen. Hope so and will check back later.

Thank you for a good story. Nice plot build. Sufficient lust to keep base chakra fires burning. Relationship complexities. Bringing the consequences of Covid into it is neat - or should I say more accurately, unintended consequences, because Covid was all about The Law of Large Numbers and corporate greed. Will be good to see how a sequel plays out.

You gonna finish this??