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Click here"Is it true?"
Somehow I was no longer nervous around this girl. In fact several people had mentioned a new found confidence I had. "Is what true?"
She looked around, seeing no one listening, even so she lowered her voice. "That you and my mother got it on Saturday night?"
"A gentleman never kisses and tells."
She glared at me. "Well, you may not, but my mother sure does. And she let me know that if I or my friends let one of those pictures or videos show up on the Internet, she's post her own! Do you realize what that would do to my Daddy and me? She says I better leave you alone Gerald, so consider yourself safe for now. But you stay away from my mother!"
I pushed past her and went back out in the hallway. Turning, I looked at her. "Is that before or after Karen and I's next date?" Her expression of rage was a fitting end to a very interesting April Fool's Day!
- COMMENTS
ausvirgoabout 3 years agoLoved it, even though the story did rely on Gerald having oversized tackle.
Ravey19over 3 years agoOne grammatical error I spotted but nowhere near the number that would spoil what is a fascinating first story.
The age difference is significant but that doesn't matter here nor would it matter if you took it forward into another story where, for example, Gerald used his computer skills to get the evidence that Karen's husband is cheating on her, get her divorce while they continue their affair knowing that they will separate once he goes to college. Just a thought.
rattlesnake01over 3 years agoAuthorI'd like to say to everyone how much I appreciate the positive feedback I've received. I'm also very happy so much of you enjoyed my first attempt. Thank you!
Anonymousover 3 years agoNice work. Very well written. I like the revenge set up. Hope there’s more stories about Gerald and his Karen(s).
raraewriterover 3 years agoFirst effort? Hard to believe you're new to this. Great story well told. Trust there is more to come.
Crusader235over 3 years agoVery good first story, hope there's more to cum. Four solid stars, really about a 4.3 but Lit won't let us do that. Hoping for more Gerald stores.
Anonymousover 3 years agoNice to see the "payback" as it were. What a fitting "catch 22" Jennifer has: she can't post her photos of the embarrassed Gerald without embarrassing herself. Good for Gerald, as he is in line for more "lessons" from Karen!
Smuttyandfunover 3 years agoAlthough I just left a comment, after I read your other comments, I felt I should add this. I know publishing your first story can make you feel anxious, and a little uncertain of your abilities as a writer -- at least until you get some feedback, hopefully positive. And anyone who bashes a writer, especially a new one, just for the sake of being nasty should be ignored. Carry on writing, assuming there will always be trolls who have to get their two cents worth to feel important. This is my two cents worth, and I hope you take it to heart. Oh, and I couldn't find any obvious errors in this very well written story that I thoroughly enjoyed.
