All Comments on 'April Fools Day Ch. 02 - Karen and Gerald'

by rattlesnake01

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is developing very well. Keep growing the story! Make Gerald get the daughter begging for him. Let the father have his share of affairs until the wife catches him. There's a lot to build up here! ;-)

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

StevieDallasStevieDallasalmost 3 years ago

At the beginning of the first story, his mom can’t afford auto insurance, but he drives to Karen’s house after school. Did they suddenly inherit a fortune?

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