All Comments on 'April Fools Sibling Competition'

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PeltWoodPeltWoodabout 2 months ago

VERY well written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I wish there's a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Very funny premise and story! Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

A very clever but plausible plot. Loved it.

collin4xxxcollin4xxxabout 2 months ago

Good story…. Really love to read about the aftermath. Do they continue to fuck? Hopefully, he got her pregnant?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

part two where they realize that they wanna bang some more so concoct some bogus reasons/ plans to do it under the premise of 'more fooling'

Arx563Arx563about 2 months ago

I would love to see the two of them just coming up with ellaborate plans to have sex. Becoming more and more ridicilous and obvious to the other one but going along with it because they enjoy it.

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 2 months ago

Cute story! Good luck in the competition.

Cheers

Sage

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Very, very plausible. Held me in suspenders, wondering if he got her knocked up. What a finale.

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I like to write and started writing erotica some years back as an exercise to improve my descriptions of things and actions. I guess I want to see if I have any talent at writing and to improve what little I probably do have.