All Comments on 'April in Texas Ch. 01'

Let's see. Bored middle age couple get naked in hotel hot tub with younger, more attractive strangers, but they don't notice over-the-hill woman flashing her pussy. Hasn't this been done a hundred times on Lit? Oh, wait, SLC sets it in San Antonio - that's pretty different. And the fourth ex-Mr. SLC does not get to cum with his common law wife - that's different. He gets to "cock her" from behind, but that's just a charade. And these sexy people are wine drinkers - that's different isn't it? No wait, its been "along day" SLC. Gee, what happens in the next installment? Does SLC show her tits at the beach? Give us a little imagination, SLC.

Steamy and full of promise.

But wait...hasn't steamy been done to death already? Maybe not in San Antonio, but surely everywhere else. Oh shit, now I'm going to have to re-think my whole comment...probably ought to do the same thing with my life while I'm at it. Here's a thought: When I read a story I don't enjoy, instead of bailing out and finding something better, I'll just leave a stinker comment. Sounds like a plan.

...Or, I could just say, "Thanks, SLC," I really enjoyed this.

Never read a novella before, but I like your pace. Just the right amount of believable sex without a full blown orgy happening. Perhaps in time! I'll stick around and see where your sexy imagination takes me.