All Comments on 'April in the Dressing Room'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Another great story

I particularly enjoyed April giving Daryl a blowjob at the dance; deliciously slutty, with just the right amount of betrayal on both sides. Keep up the good work!

SuperfluousOneSuperfluousOneabout 11 years ago

This story was HOT! although the whole episode with Daryl was completely unneeded, I kinda understand why you inserted it. But you really don't need it! Honestly, you could've dragged that part out and added much more to how they continued to mess around while she was still with Brian. That would have made this completely amazing. But great job nonetheless.

Please, more like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story bad ending

You could have kept this story going and made a series out of it

EosAuroraEosAuroraover 9 years ago
I liked the way it ended

I like that it ended the way it did, it was a fling and therefore faded as most flings do. I found it fun and very much enjoyed the sex, ;-)

col_lovercol_loveralmost 8 years ago
April was a good girl

It could have been a series, about April getting Gang banged, I love slutty girls

kensimoorekensimooreabout 6 years ago
Fun!

Loved your little story, sounds like too much fun!

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5.0 = 100%). The story is erotic & romantic & realistic (3-in-1!)

In my hypothetical next life, I will marry April! I know she would make me happy. I am well aware I won't be the only man she is making happy, BUT that's life.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

Reminds me of the 1980s. Super hot! 5* ~~ JBE

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