by clarkoverns
I particularly enjoyed April giving Daryl a blowjob at the dance; deliciously slutty, with just the right amount of betrayal on both sides. Keep up the good work!
This story was HOT! although the whole episode with Daryl was completely unneeded, I kinda understand why you inserted it. But you really don't need it! Honestly, you could've dragged that part out and added much more to how they continued to mess around while she was still with Brian. That would have made this completely amazing. But great job nonetheless.
Please, more like this!
You could have kept this story going and made a series out of it
I like that it ended the way it did, it was a fling and therefore faded as most flings do. I found it fun and very much enjoyed the sex, ;-)
It could have been a series, about April getting Gang banged, I love slutty girls
In my hypothetical next life, I will marry April! I know she would make me happy. I am well aware I won't be the only man she is making happy, BUT that's life.