All Comments on 'April Sucks'

Ending this "viral" story should have ever had!

What did Jilly say??

I do prefer this one over February issues.

And this is a story? Grade 5's could do better! An absolutist waste of time and I am not usually this harsh!

I came to this story via a surge for the best of the past 12 months - and they actually out this story first? I'm not impressed!

not much of a story, but it is the action of every wife that should happen every time in such instance.. JK

Nice Quasi Sequel

Asshole was burned in the end. Excellent

Five Stars

Nice one Brit, it is not the size of the dog eh!

They messed up trying to scare guys who had just returned from the Sandbox . As far as I am concerned the footballers got what they deserved .

Now that as how all the February sucks stories should have ended.

I always said that bastard should have met a good boxer. He wouldn't leave with anybody's wife, just on a stretcher. As far as Linda in February Sucks, she wouldn't have come back in my house, and I might be sorry, but she might be in the hospital, or the bottom of a quicksand plot...

An interesting take on the, now (in)famous, tale, "February Sucks." Perhaps you've put the lid on sequels with your elimination of M. Lavalliere's livelihood and attraction to women.

*****. Very droll ending. And a better woman this time.

This might be the shortest of the FS sequels, but it's also one of the best. 5*

Sorry, had all types of expectations from this story, & even though I liked the way it eventually ended, the middle part was just not there. Author ran through it. Would've liked that one of the women at least started to go with the man before the fight (to me, would've been on the outside just prior to getting into the car, when the fight erupted. Either way, just going from just before Jilly slapped the player to the fight left much to be desired.

Well done, Jilly! And well done author, short, light, and sweet. I think George would approve.

Top 5 sequel for sure. I enjoy the ones where Mark is humiliated, and crippled.

Wow, finally, a one I was happy with the ending. No wimpy men here. Kick ass and take names.

Clever follow-up to GA's story. You write so well! Please keep it up.

well, how do you like them apples? a wife acting appropriately for once! V hard to beleive

rk

Keep it up,excellent version! Asshole got his ass kicked! No matter how you cut it, Linda's still an untrustworthy whore, and Jim should have left her, but not before his martial artist sister kicked the shit out of her, leaving permanent damage... Just sayin'...

Soldiers learn to fight with weapons. There is almost no hand to hand training. Its not needed when you have a rifle in your hands and so does he

Love it

I read it again. The story is delightful, but I LOVE that last paragraph!

One of the more clever versions and entirely original too. Well done.

Spec ops soldiers learn more than guns as they can jamandyou don'talways need loud bangs when you are behind enemy lines

This story didn't suck! 5 stars.

I was with 2 of my cousins and their husbands in Nebraska . A Star running back tried the same thing with My cousin . Her husband teaches to hand to hand in the Marines . The fight if you want to call it that lasted about 25 seconds . The running back depended on his size to scare people sadly for him it did not work with Tim my cousins husband . He did break the guys arm and then he Bitch slapped him until he passed out . Tony took out a lineman's knee and I hit the guy with a good left cross . Talk about a Glass jaw . My Name is Nate and we all met in the sandbox . They called TNT Tim was the best then Tony then Me

Too short, story's almost like a Reader's Digest version. 2 stars

Should have been the original ending. So sick of hte GA spin offs I almost didn't read this though...

Very nice!

Made me laugh, especially that last para. Bravo. 5#

Fun to see the bulls castrated in front of everyone!!

Four stars. Far too sparse in the telling, but I liked it anyway.

JPB

...makes this a worthwhile read.

For those who think "soldiers" only learn how to use "pew, pew" tools, ....bwahahaha, you are such a maroon. (Bugs Bunny quote for those not old enough to know.)

I'd give my usual "Keep 'em comin'!" finish, but, please, authors, enough with the GA Feb repeats.

I liked it, as I have liked most of the additional endings, I personally hope there are many more to come. Just read Willowghby's comment. Dude it's easy, Don't read them! Must be a Democrat, If I don't like it no one can!

Nice companion piece to GA’s iconic story. I believe that the underlying element in all great loving wives stories, following the wive’s cheating and her husband’s betrayal, is the angst to creates in their relationship. However, this story has none of that. I liked the outcome, but it’s only a three star ⭐️ story due to its tidy narrative and lack of angst. Better luck next time, Britease.

Well, it appears Linda's husband got his BTB by proxy. Not the most satisfying for the scales of justice to come even but at least ML ended up a cripple and lost his livelihood. Will it make GA's original cuck feel better about himself? Who can say. Materiel for another follow on story perhaps. 5 stars for adding another branch to the ever spreading canopy of the FS oak; or is it a root sprout?

Nice FS branch. Steroids don't mean crap to an active soldier with com at experience and HTH skills. Lifting a free weight doesn't teach you crap how to attack or defend.

I had to laugh at this, but in a good way, it’s surprising how many versions there are out here for this great story.

Fun ending, but this story had none of the emotional anguish that so tore up Linda and her husband in the original GA story and made that story so powerful.

Love it.

A well advised reminder that it’s not the size of the dog in the fight …

OMG at least it was NOT another Jim and Linda Story Good work (jaybee186)

Finally a great story where the husband don't take any shit and handles it there win of lose I know it's a story but thanks for your service and hand salute I have seen to many marriages ruined while I served cuz dam women can't keep there legs closed, I found a good one at least I think lol been married 38yrs and 17 of those were in the service lol, when the cat is away the mice will play