All Comments on 'Aprons For Gayle Ch. 10'

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phemphemabout 10 years ago
Good Story

Now that Gayle took her punishment maybe Hamish will give her a larger room and thanks for posting this, could imagine what she was feeling and shows that Hamish as feelings..

Think now when I go back to Scotland I will see if there is a Hamish

Great story

Phil_PatsfanPhil_Patsfanabout 10 years ago
Another Great Chapter

Things are really starting to heat up between Gayle and Hamish! I really liked how he "punished" her. I can see their feelings for each other beginning. You're writing a great story. Please keep writing.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedabout 10 years ago

Another great chapter. I'm wondering if now things will pick up? Not that it matters cuz I love whatever comes out. The chemistry between these two is just wonderful and bessy just adds that little something extra. Any way please hurry chapter 11 :-)

MaynessMaynessabout 10 years ago

Thanks for posting, great chapter as usual!

inspector123inspector123about 10 years ago
I like that Hamish

took it easy on Gayle since this was her first "official" punishment. Not into sadists. The chocolate was a nice touch and Bessie taking a sip of Hamish's whisky was hilarious. Will that dog ever behave?

srcollinssrcollinsabout 10 years ago
I like how this is developing...

You are setting this up so Hamish and Gayle can fall into a loving D/s relationship not some crazy psychotic trip of pain! This is way more realistic and I like it. Keep it up.

Shysub412Shysub412about 10 years ago
Short but perfect

Danced round the room this morning when i saw the new chapter!

Excellent writing once again A2W, (and editing obviously!)

The punishment scene was so hot, Hamish handled it perfectly!

Thanks A2W and Scooter!

As always 5 stars

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimabout 10 years ago
The dogs gotta go

Bessie is on her final warning under threat of being sent to the cats home.

A2W is on her final warning to get Ch11 finished lol.not sure what we could make her punishment....ideas anyone ??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Story

I love this story! I posted to another in the series and will post a similar comment now. Please, please, please make a story about a male submissive! Your writing style includes elements that sub males rarely get to read in stories. Your dom is both stern and loving. Often for male bottoms the stories always include a top that is a sadistic asshole! MALE SUB STORY NOW! Haha.

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingabout 10 years agoAuthor
Chap 11 submitted!!

@ Phem: Hamish isn't all that bad, and maybe the larger room will be in store for Gayle. And I'm afraid there's only one Hamish, and it looks like there are several women fighting over him.

@ Phil_Patsfan: Oh, yes – definitely heating up between the two … in a GOOD way! I'm glad you like it.

@ Pheobecharmed: Things will pick up for sure now, but it won't be rushed.

@ Mayness: I think chapter 11 is fave, personally. It should be posted by Tuesday.

@ Inspector123: Nope, Bessie will not behave. She's still a puppy so there's lots to play with with her being 'the baby.'

@ srcollins: This was never meant to be about because, well honestly, I'm not into pain myself. I'm too much of a wuss.

@ Shysub412: Thank you for your kind words. Please tell me you weren't dancing to The Bay City Rollers! Lol

@ MJ: Heather won't like Bessie!

@ Anon 'male sub' – I might write one when I'm done with this. I'll let ya know!

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingabout 10 years agoAuthor
CHAP 11 POSTED!

Chapter 11 is posted but not showing up on the 'new' list.

I hope y'all enjoy!!

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