by Apolo1
I like this story, this is the first work from you that I had read. I like the humor and your style to describe the idea of their situation. Refreshing!
Funny and hot. I'm glad he didn't just have unprotected sex with a stranger....erotic literature or not, I have to cringe when that happens! It was pretty hot, so I'd love to see them screw each other and I'd like to see Brad bottom and then try to deny he's gay. I'm not buying he hadn't ever done anything given he started it. I loved the humor, esp at the end when Marcus calls him on it.
I agree with Aftermath it is a great story and I love the way you put it together and yet they were sensible, look forward to reading more
The writing level is low and the author's insight on life is as if he wears blinders.