All Comments on 'Arabella'

A good story with substantial content, unlike many of the "whan-bam-thankyou-maam" escapades. It was nice to see a build up to the likely ending. Sort of like revisiting "Hoss" Cartwright but with a scar.

A good story. A nice buildup of the charactors and plot. Thank you for writting.

I liked it very much. Thought you did a good job.

throughly enjoyed this first submission. characters were introduced with a decent amount of description, the time frame is a good choice, and the "old west" is an excellent location.

very well done. hope to see many more of this quality.

Very, very well thought out, look forward to more of your writtings. Great story

Your writing was very good. Your storyline was excellent. I felt like I could see the things Jim was describing in my minds eye. Your sex scene was good. It was all just done so well. I do love a good romance and the old west is a great place to start.

I do look forward to your next submission.

Thank you for the wonderful entertainment.

I enjoyed your western story very much. I hope you have more chapters in your mind. I do have one gripe: Big Jim fought for the wrong side in the war. Except for being a Yank he is a good man and Belle is a lady to be valued and respected. Kind of like Miss Kitty.

Yeah me too! Damn yankees have all the luck. Win the war, get the girl, take the World Series...Seriously, great story. Sweet and very sexy. Good show...

What a well written story, lots of human interest and just enough sex to be spicy, I can see this writing easily in a gentleman's magazine. Keep writing more, you are talented and your words flow wonderfully!

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