All Comments on 'Aratheon CYOA Tannivh Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lots of choices

I like the personal chef, or the cabin boy. Lots can happen in either situation.

SpankVickieSpankVickiealmost 4 years ago
So many avenues

Go the route of magic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

It's not a CYOA If you vote and hope yours gets picked... I was over the moon when I saw there was a CYOA but.......................................... T___T sorry not for me, but you do you.

phoenixcindersphoenixcindersalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Every Path will be completely worked out.

Every possible decision will be worked out, voting only decides which one gets completed and posted first. See my profile for more details

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I want him to be trained as a whore in the brothel

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
magic!

go with magic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good story but .... in places it read a little like an RPG menu, which was maybe intended.

Personally, I'd rather you draw me into your world than try to pull you into mine.

From a writing perspective, an interesting and challenging idea. Hope it turns out well.

Strand

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