All Comments on 'Arbretia - The Crown Prince'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting story line

Very unusual story line. I like it. Hope he impregnates her...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Training

will be interesting for the new queen. That's probably good for the net chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Beautifuly written

It was nice to read something that was well written for a change, great story and I hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story...looking forward to Alexis and the fat Baron getting it on!

This story is hot. I'm really looking forward to King Alexis and the Baron bumping uglies with each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great store

Looking forward to part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
really loved this

keep writing this was great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Another few chapters!!

Another few chapters!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
It's good to be king!

Now get on all your hands, and knee's, I'm giving to you doggy style mother!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
One of your better ideas..

...and I would love to see where you take it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
very good

more please soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What, is that it. Really. If your lost for ideas to continue I can give you enough for at least another four chapters or so…

HungryPapaBearHungryPapaBear9 months ago

Okay, so I wasn't sure I would like this scenario, but I loved the characters. The dominant deviant Son of the king & queen. The beautiful, & powerful queen in her sexual prime. The old king who might not be able to satisfy his queen sexually (although 85 years old was a bit far fetched., so maybe 65 would have been more plausible) while also nearing the end of his life expectancy. The son's concubines being the unsatisfied wives of fellow noble men. The Baron & his future concubine. The betrothed princess who will be submissive to the future King.

I love how the son made his mother the queen, submit to him as her Master. I love how although reluctant & indeed, defiant she was to suggestion of being her Son's sex slave, she lost control of her emotions & her desires to be fucked & controlled by her new Master.

I am not into the constant demand by my fellow readers of these erotic stories, for the Sons to always impregnate their mothers, but in this story, I feel that the Son should indeed impregnate his mother, as a complete show of his power & domination of her.

In future chapters, I would like to see how the son makes the princess, his submissive slut, while at the same time being dominant to her new mother-in-law. I would also like to see the Son turn his mother into such a complete slut, that she would be servicing & fucking anyone her son chose her to service, including the other sluts (the ladies of the other nobles he is fucking). I could see so many chapters with different scenarios

One of the best stories I have read.

Deserving 5 ropes of cum

💦 💦 💦 💦 💦

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

when is the next part coming?

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