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Thanks for Reading!

Thank you very much. I don't know what else to say. It just makes me smile.

Now, next week, my next ultra-epic fanfic is going to be altered enough from the source material that I can actually sell it on Amazon once I'm done, unlike this one! XD

Keep an eye out for...TO WALK THE CONSTELLATIONS! Which is the title!

Can't say I'm a fan of how it ended, but at least it ended on a happy note. To be fair, maybe the game ended like this too but I don't know as I never finished it.

Loved this story hope more adventures are ahead from you

There are 42 different ending slides for Arcanum - though many are quite dire!

An amazing story! Thank you!

Good luck on the new story ur selling on Amazon dude. I also liked the god like meta ending its not something you usualy read so it came as a good surprise 4 me

Love the whole series. I really think it could be consolidated and published.

The only problem is I do not and never have owned the rights to Arcanum.

...hmm...

*control F* Replace Arcanum with...Notcanum!

Perfect story. Great suspense. Happy ending. I just wish those three magic beans had somehow been key to saving the world.

Fun fact: The magic beans bugged out.

I was *planning* on using them, I fucking sweat!

I really enjoyed your story! A lot of nice surprises, our hero having some deeper thoughts and feelings, the mixture of steampunk, fantasy and wild west, some nice resemblances/quotings from other fiction/fantasy/games ) and a good writing style ...

Thank you so much!

I like how you incorporated all the shows, movies and games into this. The "bring me the keys" at the end was all to true.

I liked the questing storyline. Save the world, but first I need to find this lady's frying pan and sleep with absolutely every pretty girl on the planet.....

Great job all around! I loved the characters and I loved your writing! Many kudos to you!

One of the best series I’ve read here! Loved the writing and the constant new developments, as well as all the nod to other fictional and historical characters. Well done!

Working my way through your works and falling in love with every single character. Your worldbuilding is so complex my imagination fails to do it justice. I look forward to reading more every night.

Great story! Thanks for letting us ride along

A wonderful tale with great characters, intriguing plots and twists and a marvelous ending. Thank you for this joy to read.

If you were to excise some some of the most violent and most erotic parts of your work, and have a copy editor go over it (it's altar, not alter, as an example of a frequent error), this would be a very publishable piece of writing.

And you have neither to cut out all the sex (heaven forfend!) and violence, nor abandon your original work. Offer two versions-- one a soft 'R', the other (the original) a full-on 'X', complete with homoerotic double penetration and thumbs graphically popping eyeballs.

In any case, each section earned its Five Stars ***** !

Weirdly brilliant!

Well done I have read it more than once

i loved every second of reading this story it was fantastic

Possibly the best story this far on Lit. Well told, huge universe, finished and wrapped up very nicely. Thanks for a grand adventure.

Simply astonishing.

What a great story. Well done and right along the story lines I enjoy, little Sci Fi, bit of Steampunk thrown in and a good amout of sex. Well done

I had to break down and figure out how to get Arcanum to run on my computer all over again thanks to this little gem. (I'm currently attempting to mod Virgil into Virginia).

If I knew how, I'd write that mod!

Wow, amazing story!

Great series, I didn't realise it was heavily based on a RPG game until I came to the comments! Might have to check out Arcanum when I have some time.

Swoon...! Great last chapter, such a perfect ending. Again, every member of Resh's band played a part in the finale confrontation, incl. Dogmeat. I really liked the interaction of the characters, very lively, written with humor and wit. Highest marks. Thanks for some very entertaining hours of reading. :-D

A most fine story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. The twists and turns in new directions when the story appeared ready to go in another direction, were a delight. As were all the characters playing a key role and many of the 'evil' ones turning out to be not so evil at all. All neatly wrapped up in a box with a lovely bow on top. Reading this diversion was well worth the time away from the day to day humdrum that life sometimes presents. It's all what you choose, or do not choose.