All Comments on 'Are You Mad at Me?'

A fantastic first story. I'd like to read something longer next. I think your writing style is very good, and it would fit well with a longer and more involved story. Thanks.

Loved this. The idea of them being married and not just a random hook up is the sort of story I like to read. Will there be a second part? The surprise Mina wanted?

Great short story. Hot and sweet and loving and sexy. Would love to read more from you, preferably longer.

it was a good short story, we all need some time to our selves

i would say it needs more sex and lesbianism in it but it was pretty good. ive had sex better than that before

Writing was good but not arousing. I had a problem visualizing these women.