All Comments on 'Are you Ready for Some Football?'

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Rwa4768Rwa4768over 3 years ago

Very hot, I wonder how much Rob saw and will he want a turn too.

julianmarquezjulianmarquezover 3 years ago

Have a couple of thoughts on this one:

In the previous one, the fact that they were both horny and pretty drunk helped with suspension of disbelief. This one strains quite a bit more with plausibility. But that's mostly a nitpick.

I see that with Rob you might be planning to introduce another party, but I'm kinda hoping the story remains about Payton and Chris. It must be that I'm a sucker for romance, but of course it's your story and your prerogative what to write. On the note of Payton and Chris, I'm also kinda hoping that next time Payton is the one getting serviced/topping.

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