All Comments on 'Ariana and Nick'

Get a different hobby!

Crappy story, written by a wanker.

Plus, I fucking HATE condoms. They have no business in literature. Ever. For any reason. Ever. You want education? Go to the ABC. Wanna set an example? Go to Facebook and create a page. Wanna write about educating your sister? Leave the FUCKING condoms out of it.

If you were intentionally writing this for laughs, it should have been Jack & Bean Pohle, NOT Nick!

I liked the build up and the story plot....good job!

what girl would ask his brother about stuff like period and not her own mom when she is explaining it to her... i just left the story halfway... way too unreal for my taste... and as the other person said, get another hobby please

I think anonymous is actually the wanker, has he never heard of STDs?

Is skeletal roflmao. Please do some research on the human body before writing this drivel.

If the writer spent more time I on what he /she is writing and not try to be so crude it might have been a better read!

it was CRAP,thought i'd give you a chance and read another of your stories What a waste of time

Really she 18 years old it reads like she was 10 living in middle ages with computers

spent enough time on this

all i will say thumbs up for having ago but please STOP or ask for help if you want to continue

Please stop writing erotica, and go back to writing anything else.

complete and utter shite