All Comments on 'Armored Love Ch. 01'
by Koco_Kyss
- 16 Comments
ebonygriotover 15 years agonice begining. I would have loved the chapter to be longer your writing feels really engaging.
KillerRomanceover 15 years agobecause you've intrigued me. But I hope for a MUCH longer chapter the next round, though. You have good style. I like it(: <3 Lillian, KR.
cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years agolooks like we've got the beginnings of a great story. the next chapter had better not be as short though.
Mystery_Meatover 15 years agoThe scenario is interesting, but try to find an editor for the next chapters. Much too short. Some technical errors detracted from the flow. BF/WM stories are much more rare, so I'm looking forward to more from you. Keep writing.
Anonymousover 15 years agoLoved this! Like everyone else said, I'd like longer chapters but this is very promising!
Anonymousover 15 years agothere was a typo with the word shudder it should have been shutter.but all in all i loved the beginning of this story and i hope you write more because i will be waiting. please hurry!!!
theonlinestalkerover 14 years agoI really like how this started. i'm going on to chapter 2. hope it's as good as this one.
Anonymousabout 13 years agowhats with the names? Anthiny and Bianca? maybe it was silly of me to assume this was a story about italians, maybe it wasnt. but it was kind of annoying. granted there not exclusively italian names but, puttting them together, on would assume.. im not goin to right a story about some random guy named Vlad and his lover natasha and have neither of them be russian. just saying.
Sashasworldalmost 13 years agolol WTH?? soo?? does it REALLY matter what their names are? I mean do you like expect them to change names?
PS: At least spell correctly if you're going to criticize
Alpha_Marmover 12 years agoThe characters look and feel
interesting regardless of the names.
Who really cares? Just enjoy the story and own your criticism.
People who hide lose credibility..we are entitled to our opinions. I mean this is still America, right?
LovableCherryPieabout 11 years agoI'm not the biggest fan of Bianca's character (insecure fat girl is overdone) but you're a really good writer
