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Click hereAnthony Strong knew his life was changed forever the moment he laid eyes on the beautiful chocolate lady on the other side of his camera lens. He stood in the park stunned by this woman's unnatural beauty. Being the photographer that he is, he took picture after picture of his pretty subject until he was out of film.
After Anthony's film ran out he still stood star struck. As he stared at her without the camera shuddering, he noticed that she wasn't the typical photographer subject. Meaning she was not a thin model type, but more of a voluptuous pin-up type. She had long raven black hair, more than ample breasts, and long shapely legs. From his point of view she was everything a real woman should be.
He realized he must have been staring too long because suddenly the beauty lifted her eyes and stared right at him. She was like a deer caught in headlights. Her dark chocolate eyes looked at him a moment longer before she returned her attention back to the thick novel resting in her lap.
Bianca Adams quickly looked away from the big tanned man who had been staring at her. She wondered why he was staring at her. Maybe she had something on her face! Noticing that he still stood there staring at her, she discreetly ran her hand over her face. If her skin wasn't the color of a chocolate chip someone could see her blush from miles away. Even though Bianca knew that curiosity killed the cat she had to look up again to make sure what she was seeing was real. She had been so caught up in her thoughts that she didn't even notice him move, and all her eyes saw was denim covered crotch.
"Oh!" Bianca gasped in shock. She quickly turned her head away. OMG! Bianca thought, I have never had that so close to me before!
"Shit, I'm sorry." Anthony said moving to the side of her and then sitting next to her on the bench. What a way to start a first meeting, Anthony thought before he boldly stuck his big hand out and said,
"Hi, my name's Anthony Strong." He waited patiently for her to shake his hand. Bianca shyly looked down at his hand, and then she reluctantly shook it. Since she just kept shaking his hand Anthony couldn't help but crack a grin and ask for his hand back.
"Oops!" she gave a nervous giggle and let go of his hand.
"Um, well my name is B..Bianca Adams."
"Nice to meet you." He said for lack of something else to say.
There was an uncomfortable silence for about a minute and a half before Anthony said,
"You should come model for me."
"W..what do you mean?" she questioned not believing what he had said to her.
"Just what I said; you are one of the most beautiful women I have ever seen. I just used a whole roll of film taking your picture."
Bianca couldn't believe that this hunk of blond haired, green eyed, chiseled man was saying these things to her. It must be a joke, like the time that frat boy had invited her to that party just so they could all laugh at her. It must be a sick joke. She was never one to be aggressive but she wasn't going to let this man treat her this way.
"Why are you saying these things to me? Is this some kind of joke? Let's fuck with the fat chick game, is that what this is!?!"
Bianca slammed her book shut, and grabbed her things. As she stood Anthony grabbed her arm.
"Wait, what are you talking about? This isn't a game! I thought you were really pretty when I saw you, and I thought it would be cool if would model for me."
Anthony said this all in one breath because he really didn't want her to leave. Her accusations made him wonder who had hurt her in the past, and that made him think about bashing their faces in.
Bianca thought about it for a second and realized that maybe she had come to the wrong conclusions. He was a professional, and if he thought she had some kind of beauty then maybe she did. "Look. I am sorry. People don't say things like that to me, and it just caught me off guard." "I understand." Anthony couldn't help but run his hand down the butter soft skin of her arm. When he did she shivered. They looked at each other for a minute before Anthony dug around in his back pocket and pulled out his card. "Here is my card. Why don't you look me up, and then if everything checks out call me, and we can set up a time that you can come by my studio"
Bianca decided to take the first big risk of her life; she accepted his card. Little did they both know: this was the first chink in her armor. "Alright I look you up."
She gathered all her things, and before she walked away she said, "Thanks for the compliment."
"You are very welcome." Anthony cracked his sexy grin again, and Bianca smiled back.
He watched her as she walked away thinking, "I think I've fallen in love."
I'm not the biggest fan of Bianca's character (insecure fat girl is overdone) but you're a really good writer
The characters look and feel
interesting regardless of the names.
Who really cares? Just enjoy the story and own your criticism.
People who hide lose credibility..we are entitled to our opinions. I mean this is still America, right?
lol WTH?? soo?? does it REALLY matter what their names are? I mean do you like expect them to change names?
PS: At least spell correctly if you're going to criticize
whats with the names? Anthiny and Bianca? maybe it was silly of me to assume this was a story about italians, maybe it wasnt. but it was kind of annoying. granted there not exclusively italian names but, puttting them together, on would assume.. im not goin to right a story about some random guy named Vlad and his lover natasha and have neither of them be russian. just saying.
I really like how this started. i'm going on to chapter 2. hope it's as good as this one.
there was a typo with the word shudder it should have been shutter.but all in all i loved the beginning of this story and i hope you write more because i will be waiting. please hurry!!!
Loved this! Like everyone else said, I'd like longer chapters but this is very promising!
The scenario is interesting, but try to find an editor for the next chapters. Much too short. Some technical errors detracted from the flow. BF/WM stories are much more rare, so I'm looking forward to more from you. Keep writing.
looks like we've got the beginnings of a great story. the next chapter had better not be as short though.
because you've intrigued me. But I hope for a MUCH longer chapter the next round, though. You have good style. I like it(: <3 Lillian, KR.