All Comments on 'Around Midnight'

It seems to have become a regular pattern. Ending the story too early. A little plot line in the beginning but there is so much more to know about these two surprise lovers. This was written a long time ago. Well before the author mastered his craft. Maybe that is why I like some stories better than others. I'll have to use my imagination to complete the tale.

Losing an excellent spouse is so hard. Yes, finding a night or weekend with someone like Penny would be super special, but if it only lasted for...

Anyway, super well done.

All horses are gray in the dark.

To be continued please

Marvelous story. I wish that I could find someone like Penny.

i enjoyed it just like i enjoy black pussy

When ever I need a good read, I come back to this story.

great story and they did not dwell on it but even now Brothas have a hard time accepting a black woman and a white man. I had a similar arrangement, kind of a backdoor man. The very pretty lady had a husband and he was in jail for murder 20 to life, she loved him but wanted some cock now and then. she would come to my house and we would fuck and fuck, I did not know her hubby and none of her family or friends.. once in a while out of town we would go and we would get looks and some brothas would make comments. " you too good for a brotha" she would give them hell.

This story was so good. The plot and character development was top drawer. After reading this story I was wondering what was going to happen to these two lovely people. Keep up the good writing. 5 stars from me

two people enjoying great sex.

Worthy of another chapter

I needed a special treat to cheer me up, I got it here in full measure, thank you.

Would love for you to continue this.

Well done.

Thx

loved it.

I enjoyed this--thank you. Wish you would add more.

Characters are well drawn, and you handled the racial issue nicely, although their affair is done in private and thus no possible external complications. A black, a white, a widow, a widower, and two "friends" in need. Nice idea for a younger black female to initiate an affair with an older white man.

Your images are clear, your voice is consistent from one story to the next, the story is logically plotted, and the dialogue is believable. In other words you've covered all the literary bases.

The sex scenes were well done, although I have a problem with the excess fluids, not in my experience. Nevertheless, you have a knack of allowing the physical actions and emotional feelings of both individuals to show through in a provocative way.

I've just discovered your work and will keep reading.

Just now happened to find this story. Five well-deserved stars.

This is a great, RED HOT SEXY, story of friendship exploding into love. Widower plus widow is a gentle context for development of long-needed & VERY juicy loving. That it's interracial is unfortunately important in Texas. But they are two supremely mature people, and I hope they will have years and years of enjoying each other by giving to each other. May their copulations burn down a few barns as well as barriers. Bless 'em! I love it!

Reading the comments I have read I think there is a general consensus-- You have now introduced us to these characters, now we want to hear more about them and their lives. This is wonderful to read, Thank you

What a beautiful story: respectful, romantic, and very hot. I wish more of the interracial stories were like this one. Would love to revisit these characters someday. Your writing has a way of making the characters very true to life. Loved it.

I really like your stories. They're sweet, romantic, loving, yet erotically charged from the circumstances of the unlikely encounters. You have a rare gift on a site full of purple prose.

One of my most cherished memories and now, one of my favorite stories. Amazing how close it mirrored my experience. Great job!

you wrote an excellent story. being a black woman from an uber conservative west texas, i know the feeling of having to hide some of my relationships.

What unites us is more than what separates us

And

It's more than OK for women to initiate too!

Very good work, Tex! What started out as a booty call for a motel romp turned out to be a lot more. The beginning of a relationship. I enjoyed it a lot, it was both sexy and touching.

You and they walked through knee high respect and allowed sensuality to rule and titillate our senses.

There was neither rude or crude to diminish my/our comfort and arousal. Solid writing.

You are good Author and appreciated. Thanks!

With Very High Regard

love your stories -- as i do all the stories on here. i have never done this before but: i have a suggestion or two for all the authors. limit the use of "then." ie. ""she then took off her robe," "she then kissed me," etc,. etc,. when else would she have done it? tomorrow? yesterday? try to use as few "thens" as "thats!" you're not writing to be paid for how many words as you can use. hope i didn't offend!

TX, lovely take on interracial. Just loved the slow, romantic exploring of two wounded angels.

Never thought I'd ask this, but was is just a one-night stand?

A beautiful romance, thank you.

Will be mentioned in the New Stories thread on the AH.