All Comments on 'Art Of Growing Up'

Erratic, not erotic. Hard to follow from the start.

You might as well have written this in ancient egyptian because nobody understood it. Get a new hobby.

It's odd but interesting.. I would defintely read the follow up if it caught my searching eye.

I am buggered if I could understand it apart from that she wanted to dominate father

Let to each reader's interpretation, but I think her father is molesting her under the guise of spanking. In her head, the daughter is imagining revenge. Or is she obtaining revenge.

Please keep writing!

well i for one loved the start of this story. i can see you will get daddies attention and he will want you more than mommy thats for sure . loved how this stories going. cant wait to read the next part. love the story so far and the writing.