All Comments on 'Artemis's Capture Ch. 13'

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Barbarella420Barbarella420over 4 years agoAuthor
Sorry

The last bit of this chapter for some reason did not get published, so I will finish the rest of the last scene in the next chapter. Sorry!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thanks

Looking forward

corraaacorraaaover 4 years ago
Love!

I love this story! Cannot wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Saw you started a new series. Are you abandoning this one? You won't be the first or the last to repeat the pattern but I for I won't waste any more emotional investment into characters who are left dangling. Been there too often.

Barbarella420Barbarella420over 4 years agoAuthor
Dear anon

No, not at all! Im still writing chapters but im not happy with anything ive written so far, and im not gonna put out any chapters that will water down the story. I also have an ending in mind so you wont just be left hanging, that i can promise. Im working on the second series more so that i can keep the ball rolling and get more ideas! But Artemis isnt going to dissappear without explanation, and that itself probably wont happen for a while.

kohaimimakohaimimaabout 4 years ago
Keep up the good work

I loved it and can't wait for future chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is this the end?

Barbarella420Barbarella420over 2 years agoAuthor

This is not the completed end, but scarily good timing, as I have already submitted a full edited chapter 13, which yes is the end. So hopefully it gets published very soon, it's still pending as of now

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Aw, I do hope they find each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I loved the whole series! Thank you author, a literature piece well done

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