All Comments on 'Arthur and Maddie in the Kitchen'

Nice erotic tale of seduction. Perfect amount of temptation and deliberate teasing.

Good build up but why did you stop there? another couples of pages could have had them making a baby

Hoping this story continues into 4-5 part series. Maybe include Step-Mom, and her family females.

How come all bananas in these stories are perfect. Fate always gives me the ugliest ones with evil black rots.

can't wait for more

Perfect length. Left me on the edge

"...his dad's girlfriend, Kim, and her daughter, Maddie..."

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If Kim and his dad aren't married, they aren't step siblings, so it's not incest. It would be a stretch to say it's Taboo. Erotic Couplings? Sure.

This story is tempting. It holds your interest to the end. Can't wait for the next chapter.

All the cliches, but very hot regardless. Proof that you don't have to be original to be erotic.