All Comments on 'Artificial Intelligence Ch. 01'

Keep going, I like this road

No sex?

hey man hope you continue this story... its cool... hehehe

This sounds pretty good so far. Keep it up for us geeks out there

v.nice hope you do the next chapter soon

Nice begining but it really needs to continue

This is a cute and original story idea. I look forward to seeing how it plays out.

Nookiehunter

Original? NO. But that's Ok. It works for me anyway. I'm glad to see that someone lusts for Ms. Alba as much as I. The idea of the perfect woman is universal and as old as time. I'm really interested with how this thing plays out. Just how is he going to introduce this flesh and blood likeness of a famous sexy actress to an unwary populus?

the proof reading needs some tweaking - I know I'm a grammar/spelling nazi - but it throws me when I spot errors, and spoils the buzz. However I like the premise, and the characterisation, and the pace - looking forward to reading the next bit...

There are a lot of editing and spelling errors. Maybe have a friend or even find someone on here willing to have a look see. Otherwise it's a great "Weird Science" story. Looking forward to reading the rest.

I've allways liked this fantasy, and now I'm beyond happy to have found a story about it! I like the way you think. Only problem, as already stated, is the spelling errors.. But hey! You're only human, mistakes are made. Keep up The good work.

Immeadiatly comes to mind, that movie from the 1980's.With how she was created. Though with jessica albas body and more depth to the story i think this is better.

Reading this again after so many years. I wish you finished it though.