All Comments on 'As I Want You to Be Ch. 04'

Alright LCL. Admit it! You've been looking for a way to insert that word into a story. Show off 😉

WOW!! you haven't lost your touch in "raising my temperature" just by reading a few lines of any story you post, this one is no different. Your gift with words..... shoo!!! I just LoOoVe LJ and Mia!! They are so freaking h🔥t!! especially LJ (dreamy look) Fandamtastic chapter!! 🔥💖 🔥

I really enjoyed this. Complex characters, role reversals, an interesting first time with great descriptions. Thanks! And that's without reading the first few chapters.

I appreciate everyone's comments, votes, favorites, and feedback.

And, yes, Lesbear, I freely admit it. I am a logophile, or "word whore," or what you will depending on lexicon of choice. And, also, yes, probably a show off too. :)

I'm glad to see the story focus on LJ; her encounters at the gym, excelling in her studies; the possibility of mending the relationship with her parents, and still fumbling in the romance department. I'm surprised the scene when she finally lost her virginity didn't last longer; I guess she just wanted to lose it and move on; I personally would have wanted the experience to last a bit longer, but at least that feeling will no longer be eating away at her anymore.

Since you introduced us to Rhea and Brenda, they could be a perfect start to chapter 5; using them as stepping stones to improve her sexual prowess; she could finally learn to sense when her partner is about to cum, knowing when to stop, and how to better approach women in future encounters. The final chapter six could see all her hard work in school pay off; she becomes a successful tennis star, maturing into a more confident stud, and maybe going toe-to-toe with Kay; teaching her some humility in the process.

That's just my two cents; thanks for giving us chapter 4.

Another good romp of a read thank you . reading how lj found her way through the complex situation of coming to terms with still being avirgin was fab.

Would of liked a bit more on the scene when she did loose it but nicely handled . carnt wait for chapter 5.

Just hoping I don`t have to wait 3 years for part 5!!!!

Seriously, it had everything, happiness, sadness, strife and eroticism, not to mention well meaning and intelligent friends who could have but didn`t take advantage.

Every part was an easy 5 stars :)

I have really enjoyed this story and can’t wait to find out how it will be resolved. One of my favourite stories on this site

You continue to impress with your mastery of the precise words to be found in an erotic light! Thank you!

I just found your writing here a few days ago and your precise use of words is beautiful like if you were obeying the golden rule. But pulchritudinous? Girl you have a fetish on words or something? But I loved this story so far. Thou art a Great writer ! We all think a feel-good one. I thank thee for thy gracious syntax . Keep safe

Outstanding, and I thank you sincerely.

Wish my first time was this gentle