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All Comments on 'As Long As It's for Art'

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 3 years ago

Nice first story, that needs to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Could have been a great story if you would have developed the characters and story more...... to quick from start to finish.........

RavenOnCaRavenOnCaover 3 years ago

This story had so many possibilities, but you chose to rush it instead. Shame :(

l0serl0serover 3 years agoAuthor
thanks for reading everyone

I know the story was rushed and that might be disappointing for some people. Next time I'll be sure to take it slower!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ridiculous

Just plain RIDICULOUS.....

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