All Comments on 'As Right as Rain'

... that the authors of "First Time" pieces would place their deflowered virgins' hymens where God puts every other women's: at the entrance of the vagina, not within it

Oh, well - I guess this has become as much a convention which must be observed as that of the multi-orgasmic virgin

You should wiki "hymen". It's not where you think it is. Good work on the rest though.

Some really well written sex scenes in this story. I think it would be better to get rid of the whole virgin angle though, as Stacy is too sexually confident and aware as opposed to nervous and uncertain, to be a believable virgin. This comes across in her dialogue, interior monologue and actions. Other than that, a very good read.

no answer as to whether this author is male or female, surely if they're female, they'd know the hymen is at the entrance to the vagina, not an inch or 2 inside, why do these authors of first time stories insist that's the case? it kind of ruins the story, not only that, but she seemed far too experienced for this to have been her first time.

although a hymen is at the entrance it is designed to be stretched and with therefore handle tampons, being fingered or even an inch of a penis before breaking (or stretching which is what should be happening to avoid messy deflowering). As to Stacy having too much sexual confidence I agree but it's pretty common to see that in first time stories