All Comments on 'As Soon As I Wake Up Ch. 01'

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love. Nice twist to most mothers and sons who are honest, they want to fuck each other.

'Nuff said!

This could get really interesting, especially if he has an Aunt and some female cousins.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and commenting on my story. I like your suggestion and will consider it. But, I don't see it going in that direction. Thanks, again.

Thanks for reading my story and commenting on it. I appreciate the feedback. I always take criticisms and suggestions into consideration. Unfortunately though, 'Nuff said!" is not 'Nuff said!". It doesn't give me anything to work with. Thanks anyway.

Patiently waiting for the next chapter, great start to your story.

Hope to read more very soon.

Looking forward to reading more soon

The twin teachers, the linebackers girl friend, other family members, the list is limitless.

Thanks for reading and enjoying. I'm glad you took the time to comment. You prove that Nuff said was incorrect. Much needs to be said yet. Thanks again.

You're absolutely right. The possibilities are endless. Thanks for enjoying it so far and letting me know. I'll be watching for your future comments.

And you're a mind reader? Duh! LMAO

He could have been dreaming but, his mother surprised him by saying that they should be fucking and that was what was the HOTTEST part of true story. Please continue with the story where mother has her son's baby and live happily ever after.

I don't have a clue as to what your comment means but thanks for leaving it. I guess.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and commenting. Thanks also for your comment making sense,

i thought it was a good read. It was fast paced and there wasn't a lot of unnecessary drama. Thank you I enjoyed it a great deal!

Thanks for reading. I am glad you enjoyed it and took the time to comment.

There are so many possibilities

Thanks

You're absolutely right in that the possibilities are endless. I'm still not sure where this journey is going to take us all. Let's hope we enjoy the trip. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

Very nice writing hope you write a second part ; - )..

Thanks for reading, enjoying, and sharing. Rest assured there will be more coming. I've far too much to say to stop now. LOL. Watch for the new installments to be coming to a computer screen near you! Thanks again for taking the time to comment.

I hope you keep writing about this.

Thanks for the pat on the back. I wrote this chapter in a hurry but I am writing more and hopefully better chapters for this story line. Stay tuned. Thanks for the comment.

I was sixteen when I got hurt, and my mom paid our neighbor to come over and take care of me while she was working. She was a well built, good looking twenty four year old woman but her husband is a stuffed shirt, arrogant prick who always treated her like shit. I was a naive kid who'd seen the many times he'd made her cry and one day I blurted out that, if she was my wife, I'd treat her like gold because she was so beautiful and didn't deserve being treated so rotten. She smiled but I saw tears in her eyes.

To make a long story short... She'd seen the size of my cock, when it was hard, while she was taking care of me, so what I said must have made the difference because the next day, I was balls deep in her pussy and fucked four loads of cum into her unbelievably tight pussy. She put toilet paper in her panties to keep the cum from running down her legs but said she wanted to keep it inside of her as long as possible and said that as long, as I never told anyone, I could fuck her and cum in her anytime we had a chance to do it without anyone knowing about it.

Her husband was on two bowling leagues in the winter and one in the summer. She kept my balls wet in her gutter and my dick scored strike after strike. After four months, we proved that birth control pills aren't 100% effective. (he didn't fuck her at all during her fertile time... a later DNA test proved that our son isn't his) The asshole proudly bragged to everyone when he found out that she was pregnant. The next time, she stopped the pills, wore a diaphragm for him and fucked me bareback until she got pregnant again. He bragged that his cum was too strong for the birth control pills. We laughed at the asshole and fucked each other for seven more years. .... Life's funny. I started my own business and guess who came to work for me as a sales rep? I put him on the road and his wife stops by my house for a daily load or two of her favorite plumbing lubricant.

Thanks for sharing.

What a story. The perfect MILF doing the delightful deed. I wish my life growing up was like that. What a dream. More chapters, please.

Loved it! When's chapter two cumming?

Another great little piece of work that hit right on the money for those of us with similar desires and fantasies.. well done you x

Thanks very much for the pat on the back. That means a lot to me coming from an accomplished author such as yourself. I read your "Watching Mum" series when it was originally published and truly enjoyed it. Thank you, again, Mr. Story Teller.

PLEASE!!!!!!!we need the next part to this one, it's hot and feels like it could get a lot hotter..Nice read THANKS

Love reading ur story. Can we have a continues to a life with his mother. Ty again. The handyman

Very hot and sexy,. But too short. Too short,,he hasn't even fucked her yet

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loved the premise, far too rushed at end. How can you skip over the sex!! That's what we all come here for

Also the inner dialogue needs to be clearer, maybe have it in italics or something to clearly separate it from what he's actually saying. Keep going, I've done two mind control stories and they are good fun to write

Luv this! 5 stars.

FTDS