by HeyAll
A very well written story. I could not get over the fact I was reading an erotic story while in the story you were working with your professor on how to become a writer and write this excellent erotic story. Nice twist.
So taboo. So sexy. So naughty. Damn i need a cigarette now. Great story.
The slow steps, the obvious attraction, the stylish writing, loved it to bits.
Very well done. I really hope there's more to come with this story. 5 stars
Great story that was beautifully written. I would love to read more about these two characters. Please continue!
If you take story ideas how about one with a beautiful older female therapist who falls for a young girl who is referred for counseling after being caught masturbating to lesbian porn by her strict parents. The older woman ends up seducing the girl and teaching her all about lesbian love.
With the therapist idea, send me an email.
And thanks to all the commentors, voters, and favoriters of this story. Much appreciated.
Heyall
loved the story. would love to learn more about erin or the professor !
I loved the way that you brought these two together
I thought that by doing it slowly was the key to the story
My pussy was soaked with anticipation of what was going to happen
When the professor put her tounge on Erin's other sex hole it was as though she was licking mine
I actually had to stop reading and clean myself up before I could finish reading the rest of the story
It was truly a four star story
Amazingly sensual as well as erotic, reads as if it should be a scene in a novel; keep writing.
This was one of the most erotic and intriguing stories ever. I could actually envision each scene with my mind's eye. Bravo!
"As The Professor Speaks" is one of the best erotic stories I've ever read... here or on any other website, magazine or book. Your putting the reader "in the audience" as teacher and student begin their literary journey was great. Thanks and keep writing.
Yes, such a great story, excellent writing, and a very arousing story line. Yes, please write more as this is a model for other authors to follow! Hot, arousing, wet and satisfying for sure. Cannot wait for what happens next, maybe an outside the class meet up for long, hot sex play? Thank you.
I came 3 times reading this, especially on pages 2 and 3. Please continue I would love to masturbate and cum more.
The story was totally excellent and arousing to the point that I came 4-5 times.
Please keep up the good works and write more.
Thank you.
nice arc of suspense. Though it was almost certain they would fall for each other it was an exciting way to follow them slowly step by step. Loved to read it.
I enyou this storie. It made me hard and I'd cum twice will reading this storie. Please continue with this storie. The suspence was very good. I would love to read more.
SCORCHING hot...
totally taboo, and riveting!
Going into my top stories of all time folder.
Have enjoyed your other stories but this is the best by far, so far-am going to have to read them all now.
very erotic and full of suspense, exhausting to read due to the excellent writing style.
Very nice story about fantasy becoming reality. The fact that it took many days to do so, only heightened the sensuality of the story. Good job.
Superby crafted. The slow burn of a smouldering passion, desire unsaid and denied. Buried deep but little by little brought out into the air until it flared up into forbidden lust. Brilliant
Wholly Holie!!!😍 wow and I'm sure there are a number of other expletives unused that I could draw on. Though it does sadden me that you never allowed for revisiting these two characters say one or two years after Erin had graduated. I'm quite certain by formulating the right details and creating circumstances that could draw them together perhaps work related.
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I really enjoyed your little (by little, I mean short) story. Slow to begin with then into full bloom. I like your style of writing, really enjoyed getting into it. Would only say that it's way to short. You could add more to it I suppose, would be a great story!!! Thanks for the story anyway.
Very nice. Almost believable that it could happen that way. It was particularly arousing that the professor licks the student's asshole at the end. I am a professor myself, and had the pleasure of licking the cunt and asshole of a beautiful student of mine, shortly after the course was finished. (At my apartment, not on campus). I have fantasized about licking cunts and assholes of many other beautiful students I have had the pleasure of teaching over the years.
This is hands down the best short story I have read in a while. Definitely a five star.
From the build-up and structure, over the train of thought and the conversations, this is by far among the better short stories in whatever category.
Thank you.
JJ
A story very well told, it progresses nicely and the climatic scene has a great ambiguity, is it reality, or literature? Just another good story from a prolific writer.
First-class erotica, with a good pace. I foresee more passionate encounters, especially after Erin has graduated, so the professor-student taboo will no longer exist. The question then is, will that decrease the pleasure they find in each other? I hope not.
Exceptionally well written...in my editing job frame of mind, you've got a winner. Love it. Keep it cuming...
It’s the human nature to get aroused. This is my favorite because of the connection felt within the subject material.
This story had everything, great characters, smooth pacing, and steady teasing build up the end. I love this story!
They say that critics are vicious and cruel. Editors are worse. You shouldn't encourage young people to be that way.
Great and full of wonderful detail. Yes it pushed through ethical boundaries but still amazing. Would love to see a sequel, perhaps living low until she graduates and really starts her career.
Oh my gosh, can we get a sequel for this? Would like to see them officially together
This needs to continue. This was just a setup to a multi chapter story. Please keep writing.
Yes, it needs to continue! Perhaps a few surprises … some twists and turns? Nothing too predictable. 5 * Really enjoyed it.
As a professor myself, I identified with quite a bit of this story. Although my erotic fantasies revolve around males, I could really feel the emotions, the eroticism, the sensory descriptions. VERY HOT!!!
Definitely intense!! I think it requires a follow on, if only to satisfy the readers curiosity and for the buzz, if you get where this is heading. Great stuff.
Fantastic!
I would love to read the story comes up w/ based on the inspiration Bell gave her!
Great story. The way that it led up to the actual time that it became a story about a young girl and a older woman,kept me on my toes.
I can only imagine how Erin must have felt when her professor Bell, touched her little brown puckered spot between her legs.
Very unexpected for a young girl with limited experience in having lesbian sex
Apparently the professor Bell was far more experienced in licked ass holes.
I imagine that poor little Erin's pussy was gushing pussy juice soaking the professors face.
Anyway, it was a great ending to a great story
I would like to read about their relationship, in two years after Erin graduates from school
It sounded like they were going to continue with their torrid affair.
I wonder if Professor Bell would agree to tutoring a colleague, a male professor, and share with him her extensive hands-on experience, especially in the field of publishing and even recommend a good publisher?
5*
BJ
What a terrific learning experience for a young woman!..sexy as hell!……and as much unbelievable as ever.
But…very sexy ….would love to experience that learning style with my gorgeous History teacher…eons ago..but unforgettable!