All Comments on 'Ashes'
by Erisjade16
- 9 Comments
Headguyover 5 years agoThe author does a masterful job of evoking the sadness, longing and ultimately the deep pleasures (though in this instance only minimally erotic) of facing and resolving old wounded love. Bravo!
Anonymousover 5 years agoI am beyond excited to get to read more of this. The whole thing is just electric.
Anonymousover 5 years agoNot to be trite, but damn that was beautiful. Is there more to come? Will this too turn into a book?
Anonymousover 5 years agoI am absolutely captivated by your narrative. Give us more! I feel like I won't be able to rest until I read the next chapter. This little bit of story was like a shot of adrenaline. You are a genius. GENUIS. Thank you for providing such joy to the world.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoSo gently tightened in chapter 1 without any thing at all happening
Anonymousabout 5 years agoThe perfect mix of heart and sorrow, my favourite of yours I think. I love the balance between the characters and their long and tempestuous relationship. And that it works out for them, angel hugs sound awesome.
Can't wait to read more from you.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoYou are a really descriptive writer without waffling. One really has a visceral reaction to your writing style. Bravo!
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