All Comments on 'Ashes to Ashes Ch. 04'

His dreams made a better story than the ending you wrote.

I enjoyed the story, but I do agree with chasbo38 John's dream was a better ending.

1 star - waaaaay tooo convoluted to be interesting.

You should stick with stories 5 pages or less.

Frankly, I don't give a dammed the minute I read April joining John on the cruiseship. What a stupid wimp, to allow a fucking cheating bitch to join him and accept her again. For goodness sake, the marriage was dead & everything should remain dead & I would be more than happy to give a 10 star rating (if there's such a rating).

I give a minus 10 instead for wasting my time reading.

Good series, but should've ended with ch03. This last one was just dumb, unnecessary and a big effing waste of time.

First 3 parts were good. The ending just didn’t fit and just seems wrong. 1*

WIMP

Over all great story thanks. Chapter 4 was well written but IMO added little to the story.

She was working with the FBI. But she was also loving the orgies, and disrespected him like crazy, hard to completely accept the reconciliation. But still a good story. Love your work.

Damn there are a lot of people on here in dire need of buying or being given a dictionary so they can read the definition of Fiction. It's a story written how the author pictured it in his head. More importantly it was well written and consistent too. Even the disrespectful bit that so many people have a problem with. She was being forced to do stuff she didn't want to do. Both by the criminals and by the FBI. She didn't want to be used sexually but had to accept it happening. She didn't want to lie to her husband but she had to. She didn't have any choice. She knew if she told him he'd react badly, after all who wouldn't? How could hubbie carry on with his life knowing what she was doing. If the criminals found out then he would be killed. Of course she would be affected psychologically and badly affected. She may have been trying to drive him away as she felt she didn't deserve him. Maybe she got do twisted up she blamed him for not protecting her. Who knows. Nothing about this story is inconsistent nor wrong. All I can say to the "he should have divorced her; burnt her at the stake; killed all the men involved after dismemberment" brigade is. Grow the f*ck up and start using more than one brain cell. Sorry rant over. I'm sure that what I said will not make any of those people change their views. Great story from a good author and well worth a read. BardnotBard

Overall quite a good story but not the usual SaddleTramp ending…. Except in a dream sequence!!!

Hell no.

No need for this last chapter.

Part 1 was brilliant. The story went downhill from then.

The part of this story involving a coup of the president, corruption of the First Lady and FBI, will become in vogue if Trump is re-elected to the white house. In his own words, he’ll become dictator on day one.