All Comments on 'Ashley and Jason Pt. 02'

by LtShiharam

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
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I love both parts of this story.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Thank you for not using lay when someone lies down.

But then lied is when you told a fib earlier.

Laid is past tense of lie, the horizontal kind for people in bed. Unfortunately it is also past tense of lay, as in an egg.

LtShiharamLtShiharamabout 5 years agoAuthor
@UltimateHomeBody

Look I get ur just being a critical but u don't need to be this nitpicky about everything. It's a story apparently u didn't get the memo of me saying my grammar is bad. Ppl will know what I mean

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