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All Comments on 'Ashley and Mia Ch. 05'

by CharlottePeach

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sexy story

Overall a great story. Super sexy and fun, I like the conflict at the end. You could even add more conflict. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just

keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thank you sooooo much

That was like a super hot story and thank you for like having them use a strapon like I suggested, this is my favorite story, please keep writing, great ending:D

Casie88Casie88over 8 years ago
Great :)

Great story can't wait for the next part :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Writing style

You have the potential for a great story but you write in a some-what choppy manner. If you could smooth it out some it would be wonderful.

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