All Comments on 'Ashley Venom'

Just a couple of hours before he ordered the bottle of champagne from room service, his friend Monte, **told him they to expect an escort.** How did that get past your eyes when you were proofreading your story before submitting it?

Johns as a plural does not need an apostrophe.

The past participle of drink is drunk, not drank: Never before had he drank expensive champagne, not when he was a scotch drinker for the most part.

Roger slipped on his pair of plaid boxers and **laid** down on the bed beside her. No, he lay down on the bed.

Thanks for your honesty and your concern.