All Comments on 'Ashley's Campaign Ch. 02'

Took a nice girl and just made her a cock slut. What happened to her being smart? There should be another way to get around her problem.

Very good, but I have to agree with Anon making her into a slut just to win home comming is wrong, she has brains and beauty, don't make her like those assholes in Washington that would do anything to win an election

Giving her brother a blow job is one reason why we read incest stories but please don't have her be a blow job queen. You can give her a tactic to turn it against Ellen.

I agree with the other commenters about turning her into a blow job queen. I also want to see her give her virginity to her brother who she says she loves so deeply. Please keep her interactions with her father to a minimum.

Hope you add more soon.

Turning the story of loving twins into an attention getting (and, vote getting) gimmick would (will) cheapen a well written story. Think. Please think.

The story series started out good, but then dropped off completely once the "incident" of last years homecoming was brought up and dropped even further once the father started getting involved. Sorry, but just my opinion.