by Kveldulf
I’m really happy that you’re continuing this series, I thought it had been abandoned. Glad to see I was wrong
I was just in a relationship with a woman I met when she was a prostitute and we fell in love. It didn't last but we had some great times. Please add to this series,
It seems that your Ashley is channeling your Jessie.
I hope she finds herself before she goes down into Jessie’s snake pit. It was not pleasant to watch with Jessie. If you like Ashley, I hope you’ll spare her that.
I mean, seriously, how many sick fucks are here that would want to watch a woman degrade herself like that? If that’s the case, shouldn’t this be in a BDSM category instead? I’d guess most people come to FIRST TIME for something more vanilla and fun.
I loved (and occasionally hated) your Paramour series. Your character development is spot on and, as an educator, I saw too much of myself in Mark. (Though I NEVER touched a student, former or otherwise.). You took me down dark alleys I’d never have otherwise entered - cursing you all the way for taking me there - but fell in love with your characters.
Now you give us two extremely likable characters. Please don’t ruin this!
I approach the next chapter already published with trepidation. I almost don’t want to read it - though I know I will. What torturous path have laid for Ashley?
Sorry, can’t read anymore. Ashley is no longer likable. I really didn’t like the Darren episode but Ashley’s and Corey’s budding love made me continue. Her continued abuse of him was the final nail. I don’t think I’ve ever stopped reading a series so far into it.