All Comments on 'Asking for It'

Bravo on your first story!! Loved it!!

Thank you so much! Really glad you liked it.

Great read, please keep it up!!!

Great story. I loved it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Super hot. Loved the themes, hope there is more to come either for this story or a new one in the future.

Amazing first submission. Keep writing!

Should of ended though with him shoving his cock in her mouth to clean her ass off of it.

Perfect.

Very 🔥🔥🔥. Definitely my mind of story. Please continue along this line and that of the other story you posted. Thank you.

That's really appreciated. More to come soon, if you're interested!

beautiful set-up and payoff. great perspectives for both of the participants in the scene, feels realistic and honest. cleanly described without any obvious didacticism, but so well-structured that by the end, you are wishing to have such a Passionate Love in your own life! the arc Bradie takes is so much fun, and so good for both her and the reader. but that's because the author has such a wide emotional range, and hopefully will keep exploring it!

What an amazing comment - thank you so much for taking the time to write this! This was exactly what I was aiming for, so it's so great to hear all this feedback, and massively appreciate the encouragement. Definitely lots more to come! I'm guessing you're the one who recently wrote similar comments on my other stories so far, but if not, I hope you enjoy those too. Thank you again!

This story is so incredibly good that I keep coming back to it. One of the best erotic stories I’ve ever read (I’ve read a few). The murky stream of her emotions, the entanglement of shame, obedience and horniness. The lazy effectiveness of his manipulations. It’s just spot on.

I love this entry. I have been coming back to this story over and over. You have a very sexy brain! I would love to see some prequel material for these characters. And I hope your absence from posting is because you are cooking up more delightfully sinful submissions. If you have chosen an alternative to this site, please let us know.

oh so hot

he used her so brutally

he just wants to pound hard her super tight asshole and mouth and permanently avoid her pussu and wants her to give zero pleasure she deserves no pleasure

her beauty nothing for her but to make him hard only to get him in mood to rut her

her pussy no use to him no use to her he will never use her pussy or clit she desrves no direct pleasure

she can only have pleasure when she lets him fuck her dry super tight anal with as much pain as possible all for just his and his pleasure

she sucks his cock in her ass and mouth like a vaccum no matter how much it hurts her

the only pleasure that she can have his from how much her master selfishly enjoyed her

how much she enjoys that letting her ass and mouth fuck gives her no pleasure but all the pleasure and ectasy to her master alone

she has to derive indirect pleasure from her masters blissfull time of using her like a cocksleeve and she has to to remain satisfied with zero pleasure

and grateful that her master even throw a look at her before and after using her like a fucktoy and a nameless unsignificant street whore for free

What can i add to what has already been said. Nothing. Not only are your themes spot on, your writing is just wonderful. Perfect pace. And deep inside both of their brains. Can't wait to read your other stories.

Well that was just sort of stupid and pathetic, eh? What a waste of time.