All Comments on 'Asmodaios'

Nicely done. Good work on balancing out the oddities of the non-human and his detachment during the sex, despite his being a demon of lust. Excellent work on showing the perspective difference. Really enjoyed that, as it's something most authors overlook when writing non-human characters. Your telling was right on par. Rich in detail. Very nice.

I just love it and I cannot wait to se what else you will come up with in future stories.

I liked this story. It as captivating and i can't wait to see where it goes!

this is like sooo freaking hot!

Gota go spank it!!