by claretwine
Not bad for a story of this type. It appears to be a departure from your others but I truly liked it and found it intriguing. I love your descriptions and I like the character Auburn Angel.
Please write more of this kind!!!
Susie
It was my honor to edit this story.....especially since i was the main character. Thank you for this Claret....smiles. You are a most special friend and i love being your editor......kissses......angel.
This story made me ponder a lot over the character Auburn Angel. She's intriguing yet obvious in many ways. I liked that and hope you'll do more with her.
Janie S.
Your Aspen story is a good one. I'm always interested in some intrigue when I read. You should workk on developing this Auburn Angel character so your readers will be more drawn into the story. Great job!
Tim
Wasn't exactly what I expected but that surprise is what I liked the most. Great anal scene in the dark, mysterious, intriguing too. Well done and liked the story line.
Jim