All Comments on 'Aspen'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Departure?

Not bad for a story of this type. It appears to be a departure from your others but I truly liked it and found it intriguing. I love your descriptions and I like the character Auburn Angel.

Please write more of this kind!!!

Susie

Angel LoveAngel Loveabout 18 years ago
Smiling brightly!

It was my honor to edit this story.....especially since i was the main character. Thank you for this Claret....smiles. You are a most special friend and i love being your editor......kissses......angel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Interesting for me...

This story made me ponder a lot over the character Auburn Angel. She's intriguing yet obvious in many ways. I liked that and hope you'll do more with her.

Janie S.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good!!!

Your Aspen story is a good one. I'm always interested in some intrigue when I read. You should workk on developing this Auburn Angel character so your readers will be more drawn into the story. Great job!

Tim

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Well done!

Wasn't exactly what I expected but that surprise is what I liked the most. Great anal scene in the dark, mysterious, intriguing too. Well done and liked the story line.

Jim

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