All Comments on 'Asshole Ch. 02'

Not sure where it's going, but i'm looking forward to finding out.

Story about NOTHING, going NOWHERE

sounds like a real character, very unusual - can't wait to see the next nutty thing he does

Some people just have to have all the action from the beginning and everything crystal clear to start with. Short attention spans I guess. Don't let the naysayers get to you, nothing wrong with a complex story line and a slower beginning as long as you get to the end with all the details wrapped up and everybody lives happily ever after (or not, lol). Look forward to more. Thanks for writing, Jim

Get another hobby! Writing isn't doing it for you.

But don't take too long to publish or get to the juicy parts.... Them there anonymous types from semiliterateville will get a mite fiesty in their comments.

Sorry way to religious and preachy for a common man like myself God luv ya Love as I'm sure mine does me.

Which for me, says the same as the comment made by Britease!

I also love Denham Forrest's work so I seem to have lost my connection to my roots! Let's see the next card.

Okay..... This bit of story-telling is leaving from a decent beginning and going to a place which is getting stranger and stranger.

I couldn't follow what the author was trying to say. If the chapter was about building background for the characters, I wasn't able to follow

Too slow, with too much set up and diversion.

The Ah! AH! I mean but I think the story is about scotch and wine being drank thru an air tube on a plane!!!!! by Oh the hell with it . This story sucks!!!!!!!!

This story makes no sense and rambles.

We can only hope. Question...who had more scotch, Stefan or azboyscout?...a real theological poser. Can't wait for the cameo appearance of Tom Hanks. All joking aside, I actually enjoyed reading this jumble and look forward to reading the rest of this saga.

Where is the rest?

No beginning and no ending.