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by Paisleyanna

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DeadFaceDeadFacealmost 2 years ago

So well written! I love how everthing pertained to religious ideas. You kept the theme well

LT_BookwormLT_Bookwormalmost 2 years ago

That was indeed spiritual and profane at the same time.

sexscribesexscribealmost 2 years ago

Very descriptive. I can visualize what happens next. The story seems to continue its self in the mind.

Stillness1977Stillness1977almost 2 years ago

Paisleyanna,

An amazing story ... extraordinary, really. I hope you'll write many more.

Given the subject matter, you might also enjoy "The Church without a God" by dr_mabeuse, also on this site.

Best wishes -- J

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

Oooo…I liked this!

PlatosCavePlatosCaveover 1 year ago

Paisleyanna,

Your prose is hauntingly beautiful and your story is engaging and erotic. Thank you for sharing it with us. I love the exploration of the intersection between the divine and the profane.

GuitarmavenGuitarmaven8 months ago

Thank you for transporting me somewhere else. Your writing is rich, charged and invited me in right away.

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Most of what I write is not sexy, so it doesn't wind up here. If you want to be depressed, head over to my fet.