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by Cromagnonman

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

I liked your story! I just wish it had been in two or three parts.

5

teedeedubteedeedubover 3 years ago
Interesting story

Strange ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not sure

Where you went here.

My family history includes the loss of a large Australian estate.

But I could not get into this story at all.

Pity I usually love your yarns.

wapentakewapentakeover 3 years ago
Convoluted but well written

This story was a little "challenging" but was nonetheless well written and enjoyable. Five stars from me.

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...

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