All Comments on 'At Her Rescue'

I think you could do with swotting up on some naval jargon:

Bedroom - cabin

Stop the ship - weigh anchor

Enter the ship - board the vessel

And........

No pirate was EVER called Trevor!!

Nice concept though, keep going.

Goodnight!

This could have been a great story, just some small details, like a pirate ship would have had a crew of 50-200 men and boys.

It probably would have been a little difficult to be taken by suprise by another pirate ship and its crew.

Could still be a good story, if you got a little bit more realistic. Perhaps read some historical fiction about that time and embelish a little.