All Comments on 'At His Majesty's Pleasure Ch. 15'

Hi, I like your story very much, first at Fictionpress, then here at Literotica. Thank you for writing!

I need therapy after reading it. It's soul-destroying and not in a good way. I wish I could give it 0 stars. Barf! 🤢 Only a sexual deviant would write/like this so-called "romance". Cheating, sharing, homosexuality... How romantic! 👎

Does anyone know any similar stories to this? It can be here/other site/paid/etc. I just need something now that it's been 2 years.

It’s been two years, I have checked weekly for updates about that long now. Thank you for your writing and whatever may have happened for you to abandon the story know that it’s all so enjoyable and entertaining for us and I’m sure everyone would thank you for what we got. Which was an on-the-edge and top of the line story, I would have paid for a novel for this story, even a subscription for something monthly or bimonthly installments. That’s how good it was. I mean I’ve been checking weekly for two years, sometimes multiple times a week. It wasn’t just smut, it was a good story.

High praise, but let sleeping dogs lie.

I was struck by certain comments which were unjustly (imho) critical. I seriously doubt that anyone who continued reading this story all the way through chapter 15(!) didn't enjoy it. Otherwise why would they have bothered?!

Those nasty comments seem petty and disingenuous, faked.

As far as I am concerned, I enjoyed the story VERY much.

I wouldn't say I approve of cheating or beating a spouse. However, I am mature enough to realize that life includes so many different things, and simply because they appear in a story does NOT automatically mean the author condones, promotes, or approves of such things. To the contrary, stories are just that...stories.

We all have the choice to NOT READ THEM!

I have so admired your writing style - so elegant and so in tune with what my imagination would tell about a lifestyle like you describe.

It is almost not necesary to have the erotic sections in there - but then again they are also sooo well described that I almost can hear the characters when I read it !

I hope you one day will be able to continue - I would love to hear her plan and also what she will be "taught" by Alexander... when she will scream our her pleasure to the world :)

Its a rarity to find a dominating male protagonist BUT with an equally challenging female protagonist matching upto him. Most stories have powerful males but dumb, wimp, fragile females who always gives in to him, that makes the story less gripping and boring.

Which is why this story is a refreshing hit, as both the King and Queen are a match for each other and both are equally observant and clever. They both know about the mind games and manipulations they play and most importantly, how both of them peel away the layer of facade off each other one at a time.

As of yet, the Queen is holding her own very well not giving in to her militant King husband's desire of how her life should be lived, but I am afraid her character might be fast slipping into the regular rut of confused female protagonists where pleasure of occasional romance by the male makes the female endure pain and attacks at self-respect, thus weakening her resolve to get her freedom and life back. Female protagonists slip into forcibly adapting themselves to accept all that the dominating male wants - non consent sex, humiliation, BDSM beatings as she cries her eyes out, and compromise willingly to the male's carrot and stick approach to ensure the female is trained enough to live her life as HE wants.

But, until that unfolds, this is very clever writing with hot romantic bits.

On fictionpress.net for those interested.

If the author ever logs back in, please know that I devoured this story in one sitting and would gladly buy the book. Thank you for it. I hope you have time and energy to finish it one day.

Alexander- literal Tiger King.

Lol at below comment...

I really miss this story and I’m glad other people are still checking back. I think about the characters sometimes and wish I had someone to talk to about them!

I really hope that during quarantine, the authors find the time to finish the story. This story . Wish it was a full fledged novel.

at the person below, I feel the same way I can't exactly tell anyone about this story so it's just me checking back in my eternal hunger.

Also this was a collab right? So maybe one of the girls disagreed on how to finish it, or maybe they aren't friends anymore for some reason.

What a cliffhanger though, even if this is an end it's quite a nice one. The idea for a harp... Lets your imagination wander.

It will be a book in 2021 release in may. Will share the title once I find out.

I don't mind if this is the last chapter. They've come to a semi-understanding. The King never really showed any good qualities! Yes he's hot and domineering but he gives his wife pleasure as an avenue for torment and I think the whole two authors approach meant that for many chapters, neither character 'gives in' to their feelings.. Which becomes frustrating because for how long can we read about this game between them?

Is this story really coming out as a book. Please let this be true. I have been checking this site since feb 2017 , just for another chapter. And so have a lot of other people. Cuz the writers said that they will not abandon this story. I hope they stay true to their words. Because this story is literally just too good, to be left incomplete.

https://www.amazon.com/His-Majestys-Pleasure-Part-One-ebook/dp/B07PBRVBJV/ref=sr_1_10?dchild=1&keywords=his+majesty%27s+pleasure&qid=1594652676&s=books&sr=1-10

Im not sure if anyone of you are aware but someone published this story using the same title on Amazon. I am not for sure this is the same author but if you believe the book, you can see it's identical to the prologue of the story here. I would purchase it but I doubt it's the completion of the title or the original authors.

Check it out yourselves to verify!

Hey, I’m chiming in as a close friend of one of the authors of this story to say that both the story linked on Amazon and 2021 release date for a full book are false. The Amazon ebook is just lifted from this story word-for-word when I know that the authors had planned to do a full overhaul/revision for any publishing efforts like that. Sorry for the confusion.

i like your story so so much and would actually buy it. It is not poorly written smut but an actual well written story. It is probably the only story I have read here where the female is a strong ass woman. If you could tell me whether the story is published or not or is completed on another site it would be great!

Will there ever be a next chapter. Or are we idiots for waiting around.

I’ve heard that the authors are planning an extensive rewrite of the series. They won’t publish to literotica until it’s all done, which might be a while, but they’ll be looking for beta readers soonish.

Well written, thoroughly enjoyed, and hope nothing untoward happened to either of the authors to have left this cliffhanger where it lies. Would very much enjoy more chapters if they come!

I can't put the story down but it makes me so angry for the rest of the day. I find myself so disliking Alexander I wish I didn't read it but then another chapter comes. Certainly well written but he's such a prick, thankfully she makes up for it. I hope Ethan is his secret enemy.

Will there ever be a new chapter.

Would love to support the authors by donating in some way thru some sort of app or patreon - esp if this will help keep this story alive.

If the rumors of a full revision are true - can we have an update or news? Anything? Some crumbs please!

Hope youre both doing well during this time - Love and miss your story!

I’ve re read this story so so many times does anyone know of any updates I would pay to read this I can’t stop thinking about it dreaming about it lol x

A friend and I were chatting about this story and how we wish we had other people to talk about it with! I don’t know if other people feel the same (or if people even check this story anymore after so long, lol) but if there are, we were considering maybe making a little discord group for it. Let us know if there’s any interest :)

I love this story so much! I couldn't put it down. I know its been a long time but I'm still hoping for an update.

It is one of the best.

I am devastated that the last chapter was posted years ago, as this is one of my all time favorites that I can't help but reread every so often. Hoping you two are doing well! Let us know if there is any way we can support you in continuing this wonderfully written story!

This is hands down my favorite story on this site, and the one that finally pushed me to get an account after years of lurking. I've read it a minimum of 5 times during quarantine, and I'm desperate for another chapter! The characters, dialog, world, & political intrigue are enthralling, and as many others also said I would 100% be willing to purchase this as a novel. Please please please help a girl out and update your loyal fans!

I wanted to add my thanks for a deliciously salacious read - I love this series! Such iconic moments that floor me every time. You both have an incredible way with words, characterisation and suspense that's truly inspiring. I appreciate its been a long while since you posted on here, but just want you to know you're still bringing a tickling caress to many readers ;)

Just want to say to the commenter few months back that I'm down for a discord.

I wish the authors of this great story would give us ANY update already. I hope nothing bad happened and the fact that people are still commenting on their story years later without getting any update should tell you how good and interesting this story is. I still wish Alexander's cheating and BDSM's part of the story never happened but it's what it is. Alexander is such complex character. You like him in one chapter and then you despise him in another. I enjoy Alais very much and it's rare to see a strong female character like her in stories like this. Please authors don't abandon this.

I WILL SUCK AS MANY DICKS AS IT TAKES TO GET AN UPDATE FOR THIS STORY IDC!!!!!

This is like my 5th or plus times coming back to this story. Such a shame it's discontinued. As I rarely find the kind of dynamic Alais and Alexander has. And because I'm obsessed with MBTI, I think Alais is an ENTP 9w8 (very rare to have entp as heroine) and Alexander is definitely an ENTJ 8w7 hehe. That's why Alais is so tough and rational, but mischievous. If you were to publish it (please do, many readers still come back to here again 😔) I'd buy this book in a heartbeat.

It's sad when you go back reading previous chapters and you see authors repeatedly saying in the comment section that they would never abandon the story. Well,it's been YEARS and still no update.And I'm sure the authors worked hard on this so wtf happened? So strange. This is a great written story and if you ignore the last chapter i think it's perfect...I guess the authors disagreed how the story should move forward.Idk how is that possible when authors at beginning said they know how the story is goind to end? I'm back here again because I still have hope to see an update. Please authors continue to write! We need more Alais and Alexander!

BIG BUMMER THIS IS NOT COMPLETED AND HAS LEFT THE READERS HANGING IN TIME.

ANOTHER GREAT STORY WITH NO ENDING IS "Sacrifice by PANDARUS"..

Read until your eyes fall out....

I hope to see more or find out there is a place the rest is published as this is amazing hopefully it’s nothing bad that ended the story so prematurely

I enjoyed this story so much! I discovered it today and read all the chapters. I was disappointed to see it ended here and and I couldn’t find more published elsewhere. I’d be keen to read more of this story, or other work by the authors if it’s available! I’d love to see a full book

This was a great start for a story. Unfortunately like many stories here it ends there also.

This was a great start to a story, unfortunately like a lot of stories here it was also ended there

I really wish this wasn't discontinued...I really want to know how things will go from here.. To see more of their relationships...love him or hate him Alexander is a really interesting charecter...so is Alias in all the unpredictable-ness

Does anyone here know what happened to the authors? Anyone here have any contact with them? I'm still shocked they completely abandoned this. I would actually pay a lot to see it continued. I don't know how many times over the years i've reread the story.. So much effort and time went into writing this and just to leave it like this is crazy to me. I want to read more about this world and about Alias and Alexander. I wish i could email the authors and ask them if they ever plan to give us an update.. :/

What the hell happened? It's been 5 years!! I want to read more!!! I don't like to be left hanging like this when I find a story that really pulls me in..and one I look forward to reading..this is irritating..This was a REALLY GOOD ONE.. I wish they would finish it.

Does anyone have any updates on the authors and the publishing 😭

Such an amazing story! Hope you all are well and can continue this story somedays.

I was in touch with the authors. Unfortunately one of them passed away from covid, and the other has understandably felt sad about continuing the story without her friend. I think it might take some time.

They stopped long before covid

Like someone in the last comment said,they stopped writing LONG before covid happened. So if this is all true It's of course very sad to hear that one of writers passed away. If the other writer is still reading the comments please accept my sincere condolences. It's been so many years and still check every few weeks if there is any update.That says it all. I want to read more and more about this world. Alexander and Alais are just so interesting. So please commentator if you can get in touch with the writer again and tell them there are still people very much interested to see more of it and want to see the end of the story. I think we all waited long enough.

Have any new chapters been published?

Love this story. Will you ever finish it?

Is anyone else fucking so annoyed with Alais? She needs to stop acting like such a child and be thankful she is beginning to actually harbor feelings towards him. Something that is not guaranteed in a marriage at that time. Alexander is everything you would want a king to be-- charming, intelligent, attractive, calculating, cruel. Being known to be cruel is not necessarily a bad trait for a king to have, and being cruel at times might even be necessary. Her conspiring against the king is so childish and selfish. Not only could it completely breach the king's trust, it might cost the lives of everyone she loves. So why doesn't she give into these feelings she's beginning to have to him? And open up her desire and her sexuality with him? She is only hurting herself and potentially her family and friends. I'm almost glad this story is abandoned because Alais' childlessness is infuriating. Especially all the thoughtful and humourous gifts he got her? Can't her stupid ass see how he is with family? The only people in life that really matter, when it comes down to it? He is actually quite fair a lot of the time. There have been many kings known to be much less fair. She needs to open her fucking eyes. Or she can keep being retarded and I hope Alexander slays her and along with all of her loved ones.

/Endrant lol