All Comments on 'At Home'

The involuntary coitus was unlawful and if per is caught , I hope 🙏 he is found culpable and spends years in pokey' for this transgression. Yet the mixed feelings can br rooted in fact that the marauder is described as attractive, owns sense of humor and establishes rapport with narrator in short order despite strained circumstances.

Persuasion is preferred ever brute force and he excels in terms of making the act

mutually satisfying. He's a smooth operator who does what he does by choice unlike most who commiht this act . That's spooky and all the more so because Ashson is a very good writer.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

if the perp* is caught

wrong with this story. Home invasion, twice, which is criminal. Assault, twice, with physical striking once, and rape twice. That is quite a hefty prison sentence in our society. Even though you would have us believe reluctance and acceptance from the victim. Sorry, I can't go there on this one.

back to your old style of writing, your last few stories were kinda lame.

Get a grip, people it's only a story and a good one, you will find most all Ashson's stories are much the same if you don't like this type of story don't read them, at least they are not violent where the girl is hurt I won't read them

If you don't like non-consent, don't read noon-consent.

I thought it was well written. Could have used a bit more reluctance from the narrators perspective but other than that well done. :)

as I,,, Do,,, like and enjoy Ashon's stories and think they are well written. This story, how ever had problems for me as I stated before. If the story would have ended with the idea she was having fantasies of this male character, fine. It did not end that way. Blame it on a doctor prescribed drug, Alcohol (yes teenagers drink), some food allergy, or what ever with his signature humorous quip. I would be forgiving of the story.

btw I didn't post as anonymous. I want people to know who I am

incredibly childish, ham fisted and unrealistic (all of which equals boooooring snooze fest) my dog can write better.

Ok I get it a lot of people are bleating about readers leaving comments about a rape story citing the age old ....“If you don’t like non con then don’t read it”

What you’re missing is the other half of the tag RELUCTANCE. A lot of people like the reluctance aspect.

Reluctance isn’t rape. I guess the author is aiming for “bad boy charm” when instead he/she (I didn’t look) delivered “creepy stalker rapist”. By the way it’s still B and E even if nothing gets broken, like so many things that the author is unsure of CONSENT is required when entering someone’s home as well as for sex. Just like if find a random car with a door open and you drive off in it without the owner saying “yes you can drive my car” that’s theft. An open car door is not implied consent just like a woman having holes in her body is not implied consent. (Unless an abortion is involved then it doesn’t matter what she says because she won’t have any rights over her own body) oops slightly political there, sorry, not sorry.

Appearances don’t matter so even if the guy is (apparently) good looking it’s still rape it just means that the guy is ugly on the inside.

So on a bad average of 2 for 2, that makes this the second of your rape fetish stories. I read your “50 Shades” (no not the trashy book) and it looks like you’re onto something of a theme. Yep, I left the advice to change the category to humour/satire because I honestly thought you were using irony/ sarcasm when you wrote it. Clearly you seem unable to identify what constitutes a consensual partner - if you cut back on the rape thing (that means when they say “no” that you actually stop) then who knows I’m sure it’ll happen for you one day.

Still all joking aside folks, this author’s kink is rape fantasies (possibly thinking that it’s just reluctance and not y’know rape 🙄) whatever gets you off so long as you’re only reading or writing about it.

I’m out, I’ll move on to a different author in my search to find something erotic to read....something with actual consent.

Tess (UK)