All Comments on 'At Home with the Rothwells Ch. 02'

definetly the best family fun series...from the hottest writer..!! ! between the Sheldrake family in "HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY" and the Rothwells here...this writer really knows how to write a hottttttt story..especially including the bi action between the dad/son(s) studs in both stories! ! my hubby and i envy these families for all their hottt fun..and hope the Rothwells like the Sheldrakes get into some hottt family golden showers..and possibly these two families need to meet and really have some fun...whatever...hope toolboy5 continues his hottttt writing..

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Darn good stuff! But you could use a bit of Lauren's the writing techniques, like in, "Lauren sits herself naked in front of her computer and re-reads the part of the story she has written so far, making a few alterations here and there and checking her punctuation and typing errors"