All Comments on 'At Last'

I just finished watching a program called The Power of Intention. One of the principles is to see the end first. You have created a vision of what can be. It will be. I believe in your vision.

Although there was the essence of a fabulous story introduction it needs a lot of filling in. As a reader I felt this author was riding the emotion rather briskly but there wasn't enough realism. I rated this five stats because it was extremely feel good but it could be a lot more.