All Comments on 'At Last More Than Just Friends'

The ending was very poor! I am very surprised and disappointed with the way you rushed to end what started to be, a really enjoyable story! This had all the makings of a continuous, wonderful story! Without too much difficulty, this story line could run and run! But for some strange reason, you blew it!?

Yawn inducing, they did this, then that, then this, a sentence doesn't make a paragraph.