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curiousk75curiousk75almost 15 years ago
Keep writing...

Fantastic first submission - good story, great writing, nice dialogue and flow. Would love to hear if this leads to further fun between the three of them (possibly even a DP in the future) Please keep writing...

dirtyoldman2bdirtyoldman2balmost 15 years ago
Agreed - Great first submission

Keep up the good work. I would love to read more about these three.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
nice!

what those guys said. keep up the good work.

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