All Comments on 'At Long Last, Love'

Is this shit? Weirdest incest story I've ever read. The warm up was longer and way more interesting that the sex part. I see this is your first published story here. Please get assistance from a veteran editor. As written this was a total waste of effort.

1 star

DragonRider55

A big lead-up and then a fantasy? I just wasted five minutes reading a story that I thought had some potential. I was wrong.

but i agree with the comment below -the opening was the strongest part. hopefully this is a continuing story and you'll develop the characters and the "poly" relationship more. but a good first start. clever story idea.

You wrote a story not a tug piece. And you wrote it well.

Don't mind the haters, all they can do is rub one out cause they can't bother to write one themselves.

I did enjoy all of this write, There was little mention of how certain organs were affected. It was a first time for both, slow and enjoyable. No rushing, no seeking different parts of sexual organs. It was sex as a pleasurable experience.

I enjoyed it very much.