All Comments on 'At My Mercy'

I thought you didn't wanna use your name? XP Great job though. As many times I read it the efficient doesn't deminish in the slightest.

How did she get him tied up? Seems unlikely at best. If he's scared, as most people would be, what happens when he panics, vomits and drowns in his own vomit? And when he gets loose, why wouldn't he simply beat the crap out of you and leave? One orgasm and he goes to sleep on the floor? WAY too many holes in this sorry story.

Just terrible, even for fiction.